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Default First matte attempt, not that bad i think? - 10-03-2004, 11:59 AM

Im currently working in the computer game industry and ive been getting really interested in matte painting as well as other types of technichal illustration.
This is my first go on a matte painting, took me about 1,5 hour to finish in photoshop, below it is the original picture i found on the internet.


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Default 10-03-2004, 01:23 PM

that's a good work!
I like the warm look you gave to the image :D
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Default 10-03-2004, 09:52 PM

Its definitely believable.
In the original image, the last tall building in the middle has a bit of fog or atmosphere compare to the ones in front of it.
It might be better to keep the same atmosphere in the matte painting.
Good job.
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Default 10-03-2004, 10:47 PM

Yeah, I like the warm tone you have given it...its a great way to begin!
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Default 10-04-2004, 04:37 AM

Damn!
I was thinking about the fog on that rear building, i made some last minute fixes to some of the shadows right before posting it and i should have fixed the fog too but it slipped through it appears.

Thanks for the crits.

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Default 11-26-2004, 05:36 PM

:) Overall the composition looks good, however your buildings dont seem to have much depth relative to the background. The edge around the buildings is a bit sharp and the contrast ratio between the foreground,mid-ground buildings should have some fall off. Your on the right track though, keep up the great work.


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