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Default Snow Mountains MP - 03-08-2015, 05:46 PM

Hi everyone,
This is a piece I made as my first matte painting practice.
I would really appreciate every opinion.


Thank you so much.

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Default 03-23-2015, 11:30 PM

For a first piece its a pretty good one. Some simple changes, dull down the sharpness of the lower clouds because that drives my eye away from the focal point. The boat seems a little bit too big in proporation to where its located aswell.

But like I said its a very good starting point, you should be proud!
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Default 03-25-2015, 08:14 PM

Thank you so much for your advise! It's really helpful, I couldn't find any other clouds, so this piece has this little issues,... I am working on a new one and getting progress.

I really appreciate your opinion mribby294
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