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Default matte painting - cave city - 01-10-2011, 08:03 AM

Hi,
This is my new matte painting.
Thanks for watching.

Odell

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Default 01-10-2011, 04:08 PM

Great atmosphere,but to me it looks like a miniature model
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Default 01-11-2011, 02:48 AM

Nice depth you got there... I just feel the lighting could matched the scale of your scene a little bit more so that it would really show vastness of your composition.


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Default 01-11-2011, 07:06 AM

dncrmt: Thank you. Indeed, I'll add more details to the buildings to make them more realistic.

metalrahul: do you any suggestion on how to change the lighting exactly? thx! ;)
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Default 01-11-2011, 07:41 AM

Hi,
I don't think adding details on the distant buildings will give you more scale, you've got plenty of details on that rock texture already. Instead i would bring one of the structures in front, so the viewer can feel the depth of the image. It might help for the composition too.


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Default 01-11-2011, 06:23 PM

to thyn: That's a good idea, thx for your suggestion!
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Default 01-11-2011, 11:31 PM

Like Thyn said, adding details will help and also shadows should have more ambient occlusion.


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Default 04-22-2013, 02:24 AM

Agree with guys above, but I really like the sense of caves depth.. well done;)


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