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Default DEBRECEN anno 1908 - 02-16-2010, 06:39 AM

Hi!

This is my first matte. Please see it. I wait for opinions....thx...

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Default 02-17-2010, 04:14 PM

It is looking pretty good! Could you post the plate so we can see what you began with?
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Default 02-28-2010, 03:47 PM

hey someone from hungary, welcome :)

what is you lightsource? if its a moonlit scene, i'd reconsider the tones of the image.

cheers!
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Default 02-28-2010, 09:41 PM

A few comments:
1. The sky is very grainy and appears to include shafts of sunlight in what appears to be a nightime image..
2. The image is very monotone. Even if there was a strong blue hue to the image it would still contain a range of different blues.
3. Most importantly, as holden suggests, the lighting needs reconsidering. The yellow internal lighting suggests a moonlit scene and yet the exterior seems to be too evenly and brightly lit. The artificial lighting would include a range of warm tones and the street lights would, for instance, wash across the pavements and up the adjacent facades.

Hope this helps :).
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