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Default Desert Valley matte - 10-13-2008, 05:55 PM

Hi everyone, been a while since i posted here :)

This is a matte i did last week, I'm still learning a lot and taking a lot in from the pros like a sponge. Any comments are appreciated :)

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Default 10-13-2008, 07:28 PM

Very interesting, I quite like the colours and the lighting. So simple, yet so fascinating. I especially like the blue highlights on the little rocks on the ground.
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Default 10-13-2008, 10:56 PM

Very interesting indeed. I do like the concept.
What you need is more atmosphere.
Also some matte line cleanup.
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Default 10-14-2008, 12:08 PM

Thanks for the comments.

Homer, when you mean matte line clean up, do you mean the mountain edges in the background?
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Default 10-14-2008, 04:23 PM

Yes, If you don't adjust the edges it will look like a cut out board.
It should feel like they are farther than the center of the mountain...
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Default 10-15-2008, 09:54 AM

Thanks i appreciate the crit :)
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Default 10-16-2008, 02:11 PM

beautiful work. I love it
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Default 10-17-2008, 02:58 PM

thanks :)
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