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Default city and the sea - panorama matte painting - 10-27-2004, 04:28 AM

here my animated "panorama" mattepainting
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http://www.fkmaster.de/movies/city_vergleich2_web2.mov



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Default 10-27-2004, 07:39 AM

I think you should add some sort of a beach there... cuz now it seems like the whole sea is floating on air


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Default 10-27-2004, 11:15 AM

I almost like the clouds better in the origonal plate and something seems a bit weird with the waterfall there seems to be to much mist almost. and im not sure what the blue thing is on the middle left side. And there should be some sort of beach or rock formation near the edge of the water it doesnt seem to natural for the trees to be covered in water with not rock base or sand base for the island to be sitting on.
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Default 11-08-2004, 07:36 AM

Im assuming that the blue thing is another waterfall? Get rid of it I say because you don't want to over-do it unless it's absolutely neccessary. Certainly the foreshore is something to work on. Looks promising though.


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