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Default Early Spring - 01-28-2011, 04:39 PM

hello! tweaked the colors and lights and i'm calling it the final version 'for now' - thanks for those who commented about my painting! appreciate it.

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Default 02-20-2011, 12:54 PM

Nice work, I think you could use some warmer tones in the mid ground tho, notice how well that warm highlight works; try to figure out a way to collaborate that on to the ground with less saturation. And something needs to be done with those two columns in the mid ground. Lighting, I think, seems to be the problem, some shadows on the ground should help.
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Default 02-21-2011, 02:00 AM

Really lovely work. There is just one small problem in mho... i think you have some issues with the textures of the foreground rocks. The left one looks too flat and the right one out of scale. Anyway, i think you did great work!


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