10-14-2012, 10:47 AM
I have been following your updates on here and I agree that this is a big improvement.
You mentioned that you need to fix the lighting here and this is the first thing that jumps out at me. There are still hard edged shadows visible when there shouldn't be. This is particuarly evident in the bottom left foreground.
I think that bringing back in the town or adding in an element near the lake would help here. This would introduce more of a clear focal point. Adding in a light souce coming from this would also help. This would give you a nice contrast in lighting. Blue against yellow/ orange. I would also like to see more hills going off into the distance to add more depth.
Just a few thoughts but nice job. Looking forward to seeing more.