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Petri.J 09-27-2012 04:04 AM

Self-assembling city
 
This is still in concept stage so if you have any suggestions on how to improve this, now is a good time to critique.
I used central composition because I wanted the eye to focus on that building, but maybe I should have some more stuff flying around it?
I also left the sky kind of dark so that artificial light on the building will get more focus.
I think the picture might need some stuff on the background, but I would not want to add anything too dominating there so that focus would stay on the building. I tried some huge levitating spherical buildings, but they attracted too much attention.

I also had an idea of making the background even darker like the building would be build in some huge hall. I might add a version of that if it looks decent.

I'm not entirely happy with the result, I feel that it's missing something. As a thumbnail it looks good but it doesn't give me that Whow effect. I'm not sure if that is because it doesn't have details yet or if is because of something more fundamental. Any thoughts?

Cheers, Petri J

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-7wtJfh5eLJ...ncepts_004.jpg


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