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kire 08-01-2012 03:15 AM

Alien Cloudscape - Erik Schumacher
 
Hi all,

I'm new here and this is my first post. :) I thought the contest was pretty challenging and I really want to get better at this. However, I don't expect to win anything, especially after seeing the first couple of wips from the other guys, so I only take part for fun.

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/4464/wip3d.jpg

This is what I got after the first couple of hours. I think I'll have to rework some of the clouds and refine the painting as it really looks messy right now. Of course lighting and color values are all over the place as well. The original concept is just there as a place holder for the planet.

I guess I also got the basic shape of the clouds wrong, did I?

kire 08-02-2012 11:34 AM

http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/2162/wip5c.jpg

I completely overhauled the first cloud layer. Still lots of blending work to do, but I like the way better now.

kire 08-04-2012 02:45 AM

http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/2489/wip7s.jpg

Now it's mostly refining I guess. (:

kire 08-05-2012 10:46 AM

http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/7494/wip8y.jpg

So, after I detailed the clouds for hours I decided to lose some of the detail again with the addition fog and haze. I'm just not really feeling this thing yet, and the monotony of the clouds is kinda bothering me too. I might work on the colors some more.

Kaioshen 08-05-2012 10:29 PM

I hear you man, the colors of the clouds can get to you after a while but you are doing great. You actually have more color variation than I do haha.

A small crit though, just watch out for repeating patterns in your clouds. Easily fixed, just letting you know ahead of time.

kire 08-06-2012 02:43 AM

thanks for the pointer man, I hoped it wasn't too noticable, but I guess I was wrong about that lol. I'm working on it (:

kire 08-07-2012 01:05 PM

http://img860.imageshack.us/img860/9200/wip9r.jpg

worked with some lighting

kire 08-21-2012 01:04 PM

http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/2923/wip11.jpg

I'm getting frustrated with this thing. Can't seem to make it better anymore and the psd is also messed up because of all the updates and edits D:

kire 08-23-2012 12:41 PM

probably the final :)

http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/2121/wipthread.jpg

Yatzenty 08-23-2012 09:17 PM

You captured the concept quite well. If I may - I think the clouds feel bit too solid, they need maybe bit lighter treatment on the edges to depict their physical attributes.ps. Thanks for your comment in my thread.


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