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metalrahul 06-11-2012 02:06 AM

Mystic Valley
 
Hi guys,

This is one a personal piece after really really long time, getting some time off so brushing up my skills. Anyways before I call this one finished I would really like to get some comments from you all here in this great forum.

Original plate
http://www.mediafire.com/conv/5a3512...cb392b8c6g.jpg

DMP
http://www.mediafire.com/conv/1c53c5...fcfc75056g.jpg

I would really appreciate any comments or criticism., thanks your time.

Cheers,
Rahul

hardy 06-11-2012 07:14 AM

Hi man!

You've done really nice work here. I really like mood and depth of the image.
Only one concern - Central tower has the same design and elements like other towers. I understand - it's the same kind of structure, but to my mind - better to do something a bit huge and with a bit different (may be additional) elements.

Nevertheless - it's very good DMP! Love it!

Cheers
Alex

pkorion8 06-12-2012 01:18 AM

Hi Rahul,
Love the depthh you have created and blended those structures.Great work Rahul.
I have to agree with Hardy's comment about the Central structure.The scale is very huge, its far as well but still looks like small ordinary ones.By seeing these all towers, it seems the way they have created is a bit raw way there the central structure can be a bit deshaped less organized plus can have some more thin lines coming out etc etc ( upto you ).I like the branches coming out effect at the left corner structure. maybe thse kind of details can help at the center on also.
Keep going!!

metalrahul 06-14-2012 11:37 PM

Thanks for the comments Alex and pkorion8, I don't think I will change the scale but I like idea of adding more details and here is the an update

http://www.mediafire.com/conv/496c31...465fc1ce6g.jpg

Once again thanks for the comments guys and I would really like to get some more... :)

hardy 06-15-2012 12:05 AM

Yep
To me it's much better! )

soliloque 07-23-2012 08:05 AM

Really nice! have you thought of putting highlights on your main building? I think it could be nice if there's any reflective materials on it.


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