WIP: ROME

[Boof]

Posted an earlier sketch, this is the sketch I'm going with. (Bldgs are for placement for now). I'll post final soon.

-Eric
http://www.studioeb.com/ROME_7.jpg

[brad]

Looks good.
But I would have loose the front statue.

[stevenbray1]

Very nice sketch, what's the project?

And I agree, unless the foreground statue will the centre of attention for the shot, she needs to be moved.

[Boof]

Well, here's the painting from my earlier sketch. People in scene are just for scale. Thoughts on it?
-E.
http://www.studioeb.com/MP_ROME.jpg

[chris_mac]

Your painting skills are definitely up to scratch. The lighting looks good to me as well.

Like the composition, but PLEASE remove that foreground column... or at least move it back a bit, at the moment it looks clumsily pasted on to your image.

Also, I might be wrong but the perspectives of some of your buildings look a little odd. Can't quite put my finger on what's bothering me - something just doesn't read right.

Looks good though.

Hope this helps.

[Sally]

Boof,
It looks good, one thing though, the perspective of the walk way lines doesn't match the main building.
Also the shadow inside the main building top, does not match the main light.
good work.

[phoenix]

very nice work