View Full Version : a few new works...

05-18-2009, 08:01 AM
some of the mattes idid recently..

the first one i already posted one .but now idid colour correction..
plz tell me ho t oimprove this matte....


and the other two are new ones..



critics and coments r welcome


05-28-2009, 02:01 AM
I like them, first one is the strongest I think.

A way to improve it would be to make the branches/leaves smaller and more finely detailed (hope that makes sense) as to me at the moment they draw too much attention to themselves. Because its black on white near enough as they are against the sky they become the area of the image with the highest contrast so the eye goes there first. I feel at the moment I get stuck at the branches and leaves and find it hard to progress into the painting.

Second one is good, might benefit from more detail on the cave surface, but the realative proportions and sense of scale is excellent.

The third I feel needs some work on the sense of depth. Look particularly at the black values and saturation. Contrast and saturation should reduce the further into the landscape you go. Look up "Atmospheric Perspective" and that should explain everything.

Looking great, look forward to seeing more of your work