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Glazyrin
04-18-2009, 12:58 AM
hi guys!

I need your comments about the composition and color

http://glazyrin.com/chal/Haunting/concept.jpg

Noel B
04-19-2009, 12:57 AM
compo isn't bad .. perspective is off though. The beach on the left points up and the horizon line is below, but that is easily fixed.
Colr seems to be fairly even and the farther along you go you can adjust things to suit the work. I would also take a look at your contrast seems a bit washed out on the mountains if sun beams were actualy hitting the slopes there would be real contrast.

Glazyrin
04-19-2009, 05:25 AM
thanks, but i feeling that composition and perspective fails. Image boring