View Full Version : Dark fortress

Stas Lobachev
04-11-2009, 05:51 AM

04-11-2009, 01:50 PM
Looks nice, but the castle is almost at the top of the painting, leading my eye right over the edge.
Looking at the castle, and going back and forth between it and the horizon, the perspective seems off.
I think you'll find these two things very easy to fix, probably, so keep on drawing, I like it!

04-11-2009, 09:11 PM
Hey man , good start!

One thing you want to pay attention to is how someones eye will move around your painting. Right now if you were to look at this peice in full without scrolling your eye would start at the bottom left side and go right to the top right and the eye would exit the image causing the person to lose interest, you need to figure out a way to keep the persons eye staying in the image. One suggestion would be to make the clouds darker at the top so the edges are not so bright and maybe put a cliff on the left side in the bg right along the edge of the left side. But thats just a suggestion to solve the problem , there could be another 1000 ways to do it :D


Stas Lobachev
04-11-2009, 11:48 PM
Thank you very much, guys!!!

04-13-2009, 10:59 AM
Awesome brushwork.