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kbarts
04-04-2009, 09:36 AM
I am back:)

This is a matte for a Star Wars fan film.
What is your oppinion how can i make it better?

thanks

bence

http://kbarts.hu/tmp2/prison_matte_wip2.jpg

Pavel Cucka
04-04-2009, 01:48 PM
Looking juicy, I like it. Kinda has nice style to it. Looks almost like a traditional MP.

thirteen
04-04-2009, 03:57 PM
looks very good. i wonder if it would look better to change one of the moons a little. it kind of looks like the small one is just a copy of the large one that was scaled down. maybe it could be a slightly different color or something? just a thought.

kbarts
04-06-2009, 02:07 AM
thanks you.

i updated the moon, i will post it soon.

kbarts
04-06-2009, 11:42 AM
here is an updated version.

Changed the bigger moon and moved the central mountain a bit right.

http://kbarts.hu/tmp2/prison_matte_alt.jpg

Vancouver VFX
06-16-2009, 02:26 PM
nice work!
the moons look like the have different light sources the angle of them just looks a little off, I little rotate may fix....
the bigger one looks like its tilting up small one tilting down

Solidus55
06-17-2009, 06:46 AM
Very nice!

I agree with the comment above regarding the moons, should be a quick fix.

Also, maybe its just me but the mountain on the far left seems a little too illuminated if the moons are your primary light source. Seems like there should be a little bit more shadow in that area.

Overall though very traditional, definitely got the Star Wars vibe.