View Full Version : Prison facility
04-04-2009, 08:36 AM
I am back:)
This is a matte for a Star Wars fan film.
What is your oppinion how can i make it better?
04-04-2009, 12:48 PM
Looking juicy, I like it. Kinda has nice style to it. Looks almost like a traditional MP.
04-04-2009, 02:57 PM
looks very good. i wonder if it would look better to change one of the moons a little. it kind of looks like the small one is just a copy of the large one that was scaled down. maybe it could be a slightly different color or something? just a thought.
04-06-2009, 01:07 AM
i updated the moon, i will post it soon.
04-06-2009, 10:42 AM
here is an updated version.
Changed the bigger moon and moved the central mountain a bit right.
06-16-2009, 01:26 PM
the moons look like the have different light sources the angle of them just looks a little off, I little rotate may fix....
the bigger one looks like its tilting up small one tilting down
06-17-2009, 05:46 AM
I agree with the comment above regarding the moons, should be a quick fix.
Also, maybe its just me but the mountain on the far left seems a little too illuminated if the moons are your primary light source. Seems like there should be a little bit more shadow in that area.
Overall though very traditional, definitely got the Star Wars vibe.
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