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AleXo
03-21-2009, 08:00 AM
Hi!

This is ma second attempt to make something interesting.

http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/2644/mation.jpg

And i don't know what should I do at next...:P

Sorry for my English - I'm still learning it :P

thirteen
03-22-2009, 02:04 AM
I think your perspective is very wrong here. You should use some perspective lines as a guide.

MechaTwiggy
03-27-2009, 01:02 PM
I agree with thirteen. And I notice that your light on the ground is not the same shape as your window/door things.

Laura
03-27-2009, 07:56 PM
I really like your concept- I agree with the other two comments, and perhaps fade out the distance beams on the ground and the detail. What should be in the door way? Something dramatic- either with light or a being/figure/...
Great start in my opinion!

Rahakasvi
04-11-2009, 05:18 AM
I see nothing wrong with the perspective, but the lighting..

You have light coming in from both, opposite directions! you have two suns outside? If you do, then I can't imagine why the lighting would be wrong :D It could just look like that. But if you want to achieve realism, I strongly suggest to think where your light sources are.