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T-Tarek
03-08-2009, 02:40 PM
Hi,

This is my first message on this site, I'm new here :)

I present to you my last Matte painting, it is not very full (only 3 stocks), but the problem is that I was not too many ideas to fill it.

Those that I show here is only the beginning, no adjustment has been done.

Here is the beginning:

http://upload.stabland.fr/images/img36/nature_2.png

Thank you all for your future comments and suggestions :) and i'm just beginner

And sorry for my English.

metalrahul
03-17-2009, 04:05 AM
At this point I don't have nothing to say about this work. But I will strongly suggest you read a little bit about composition rules, perspective, color harmony and also most importantly closely study all great work posted in this forum.

T-Tarek
03-19-2009, 06:24 AM
Thank you very much.

davidmattingly
03-20-2009, 10:11 AM
Hi T-Tarek-
One quick suggestion: The way the the foreground mountains stop right in line with the background mountains should be avoided--that is called a tangent. You should move your forground mountains either up or down so than the background mountains don't intersect like that.
Also, you don't have a good sense of what direction the light is coming from--choose one direction, and light all the mountains accordingly.
Hope that helps! Keep at it.
David Mattingly

T-Tarek
03-20-2009, 01:36 PM
Thank you!

You can forget this matte painting., I'm working on other matte painting and that was a bad start.

Thank you again.