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nadz
02-25-2009, 02:46 PM
Hi all, at this point I could use some crits and comments. Thanks
[IMG]http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/859/lagoonl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)[img]

Rochnan
02-26-2009, 11:27 AM
Looks good, I like the red in the foreground, altough I might like it more if it framed the picture, my eye is led off the picture on the right.
The water under the lily pads is visibly different from the rest of the water. You might want to manually erase the water, and draw in some lily pads over the rest of the water (I'm also not sure if the perspective is right).
Also, the two diagonal rocks on the river bank look unnatural. But in a good way, so maybe you could do some more like that.

nadz
02-26-2009, 12:07 PM
Thanks for the input. I'll work on making it better and post an update asap. The diagonal rocks are real ,not sure how they got there.

nadz
03-02-2009, 02:43 PM
Here's an update. C&C welcome.
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/3451/lagoon3deck.jpg (http://img21.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lagoon3deck.jpg)