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kaustavsinha
02-21-2009, 03:06 PM
Hi Everyone,
Here's my latest mattepainting! Kindly critique it!

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/5832/th4gfinal.jpg

LRomero
02-21-2009, 03:42 PM
Good start to your illustration.

Work on the horizon line a little bit more.. it's hiding too much and the mountain line in front is somewhat coming forward as the horizon line.

kaustavsinha
02-21-2009, 10:04 PM
Hi LRomero,
Thanks for the complements! Yes, I'll try to work more on the horizon line.