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Glazyrin
01-18-2009, 01:28 PM
This is my concept of "The world of panthers"

concept

http://glazyrin.com/tantra/1world.jpg


some REF

http://glazyrin.com/tantra/ref.jpg

It is result of one evening.

I will be glad to your remarks and councils)

metalrahul
01-18-2009, 06:54 PM
its looking good man but just check the perspective of the river and the shadows. I think it need more shadows overall and some atmosphere. There is lot of polishing to do but but its already there so just spend time to take this to the next level :)

Glazyrin
01-19-2009, 01:35 AM
Thanks guys, it there was a starting stage, will continue to work

lukedesmith
01-20-2009, 09:00 PM
Really nice. i do have a few suggestions though. I think you should lose most of the rivers. Just keep one to carry the viewers eye. Plus they are way to strait, they should wind their way down to the bay. The way you have them here suggests they are flowing up-hill. Another thing is the birds over the moon. In a practical application of a matte painting these would be animated and left to the compositor. they are a nice touch though and you may want to leave them for reference. these are just my opinions and I am looking forward to your updates. P.S. I like this painting!!

Glazyrin
01-20-2009, 09:36 PM
Thanks, lukedesmith.

This update http://glazyrin.com/tantra/2worlds.jpg

but this is not final image,will continue to work.