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splarson
01-04-2009, 12:48 PM
Hi, this is a matte painting i've been working on for a school project. The final shot consists of a princess or harem girl walking out on to a balcony to view the palace and surrounding city.

I would appreciate any feedback to take this painting further.


http://i401.photobucket.com/albums/pp91/splarson/PoP_matte_full.jpg

angus sheehan
02-24-2009, 03:27 PM
Hello splarson,

Your composition works very nicely!

I would suggest laying down some perspective lines if you haven't already. Some of the elements and textures look vaguely isometric/orthographic.

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I realize it's been over a month since you posted this WIP. How did that school project go?

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splarson
02-24-2009, 08:34 PM
Thanks for the feedback Angus,
Here is an update on the painting with the "princess" in shot . i've changed a few things which, i think, make the painting more effective.

-I've noticed that some of the building details should be further refined due to the paintings current resolution.

Again any more feedback is greatly appreciated.

http://i401.photobucket.com/albums/pp91/splarson/PoP_wip.jpg

Rochnan
02-26-2009, 12:39 PM
Hey, I see this is your second post, so welcome to mp.org :P
Since you've changed the sun, sky, mountains and general lighting to a more orange color, shouldn't you also change the city's buildings accordingly?