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Glazyrin
12-09-2008, 01:07 PM
http://daymedia.ru/work/glazyrin/factory.jpg

This work became at leisure, for training. In a short space of time

rohypnolgodbo6
12-09-2008, 08:32 PM
Cool!beautiful color image! just where the that red light come from

ReX357
12-10-2008, 09:57 AM
The red light doesn't work in there. Main chain hanging from ceiling looks like it's not in the image. Same for everything on the bottom left: lighting is wrong (Tire, wooden boxes, etc). Leopard on bottom right as a shadow that just cuts off? 'Mechanical arm' on right post at mid height just fades in and out? And the two chains to the right of that were just pasted there? Mechanical arm on the left doesn't look like it sits in the image at all. Shadow of the bike is wrong. It looks like it's shadowing in front as well as in the back of the bike. Oh and the steam coming out of that coffee cup sitting on that wooden box at the bottom left looks ridiculous.

This is far from being a finished piece.

Glazyrin
12-10-2008, 01:53 PM
Thank you, you are right. It is necessary it will be yet to work))))