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graphmac
11-15-2008, 09:47 AM
Here is a WIP for some steps down towards a man made cave formation.

Please give your thoughts on colours / composition etc.

http://fc69.deviantart.com/fs38/f/2008/320/5/0/Abandoned_Relic_by_graphmac.jpg

ReX357
11-15-2008, 12:26 PM
Nice! I like that concept! Girlfriend happen to look and she thinks it's cool too. Can't wait to see it with photo reference!

For colors, I have nothing to say really. I like the orange highlights. That cyan water looks really good too.

cynthiamiur
11-16-2008, 06:26 AM
I see a problem with light and composition.

First, I read the title was "Cave Entrance" but it was difficult to find where the cave entrance was. If you want the viewer's eyes come from left to right, I would suggest expand the light, put those mountains in the background, and make the cave entrance more important. You can play with the light to guide the viewer's eye to the entrance, also playing with more saturated colors there. These mountains in the background are cool but too important and distracting. For a while I thought the cave entrance was somewhere there.

If you want a good composition, create a point of light on upper left corner, so the light its the first thing to see when u see the work, and then add some movement playing with the light, so your eyes follow the light and goes to the right, and you notice there are some mountains but not too important (and your eyes don't stay there for a long time) and then go to the cave entrance, the most important thing, with more things to see there, maybe colors, details, etc.

Hope it helps.

graphmac
11-17-2008, 01:22 AM
Sterling advice cynthiamiur, I will take it on board and update this soon.
ReX357 - thanks for the kind words!

roguenroll
11-17-2008, 08:43 PM
nice look, love the painting design, kinda of spider web, or icing. interesting.

metalrahul
11-19-2008, 05:33 PM
hey its a good start and now show us a detailed version :)

egan
12-05-2008, 10:51 AM
Nice one! The colours really work for me; the combination of grey with green and turquoise and orange is great.

What about decorating the cave entrance with more details and colours (like the turquoise used on the left)? Just an idea. :)

graphmac
12-28-2008, 11:07 AM
Here is a more composed image;
Changed the colours, but any new observations, before I add details?

http://fc96.deviantart.com/fs38/f/2008/363/3/e/Water_Cave_by_graphmac.jpg

moakley
12-29-2008, 05:31 AM
Hey!
This is a very fine concept mate, you should definately work it up into a final mattepainting :)

all the best!
Mike

ReX357
12-30-2008, 06:02 AM
That's a pretty sweet sketch too! I like it!

kuroe702
01-01-2009, 03:21 PM
graphmac I love your sketches and your composition, can't wait to see your matte painting!

metalrahul
01-01-2009, 05:17 PM
Hey there, I think its much better than previous concept because there is lot of details to look at and there is more depth too.

HazyWay
01-02-2009, 08:13 AM
there both really nice concepts, but i like the second one a lot more the colours and composition work much better, and it leads the eye nicely through the pic how long till the next update?

graphmac
01-02-2009, 08:44 AM
Thanks for the replies, I will update it on Sunday - I like the second one too.
It just has more awe and wonder to it.

A little messy at the moment - I will be working it into a detailed painting, not a matte painting.

graphmac
01-22-2009, 03:06 PM
Very hard to find time to work on these personal bits;
Never feels like they are right.

http://fc36.deviantart.com/fs41/i/2009/022/a/c/Water_Cave_2_by_graphmac.jpg

Anyway, here is an update - later than I'd hoped.

graphmac
04-06-2009, 01:59 PM
http://fc43.deviantart.com/fs42/f/2009/096/3/3/Landscape_Matte2_by_graphmac.jpg

Another update.
This is bad, I'm starting again.

Rochnan
04-06-2009, 11:23 PM
Looks good, altough this latest is very green.
Do you have a clear direction for the painting, or are you making stuff up as you go along?

graphmac
04-07-2009, 01:58 AM
I'm just making it up as I go along. I feel a bit defeated by this image.
I'm chasing something in my head that I can never realise.
I think I should just start something new and stick this thing in the vault.

Something with photo refs and 3D models, I think that would cheer me up no end!