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mimir
10-20-2008, 10:37 AM
This scene depicts a military site in a barren snow land... would love some crits to finalize it. I still need to add a few more details such as technical details on the base, some snow particles on the sign, drifting snow, and corrections to the orange color on the top of the mountains.
I'm also thinking about adding a small hovering ship somewhere in the foreground but i'm worried about how it will affect the composition.

http://www.3d-realm.com/files/projecttundra.jpg

steinbam
10-23-2008, 12:35 PM
Nice work, love the color and design

The only thing that throws me off a bit is the perspective. It seems like the camera angle from the building is in a deep 3 point perspective (from the viewer looking up), though the mountains are at eye level (looking horizontal from the camera.)

homer
10-24-2008, 05:09 PM
It looks interesting to watch already.
I would not add anything else.

I would have add sharp (not blurry) blue highlights on the ground.

But as I said it's fun to watch.

elwaely_13
10-26-2008, 12:39 PM
wow

love the lights effect

mimir
10-26-2008, 04:12 PM
Thanks guys i apreciate it!

moakley
10-28-2008, 07:05 AM
Very nice indeed! This is proof of less-is-more :) Only thing I might be inclined to do though is to add some powdered snow laying on the building in places.

Here's an extreme version of what I mean :)

http://www.usgennet.org/usa/mo/county/stlouis/kempland/fire3-winter3.jpg

darkblue_wire
11-10-2008, 09:47 PM
Great & simple work
i like the enviroment and concept very much

lightwell
11-11-2008, 01:44 AM
Here's an extreme version of what I mean :)

No exagerration there, thats an amazing photo. Was it made worse by firemens hoses, it looks isolated?

As for the painting, very nice especially the palette. It would be nice to see it extend into the sky a bit more, the sky isn't as strong as the rest of the composition at the moment.

Jim