View Full Version : Greenhouse Catheral- Grows Faith crit plz

10-17-2008, 05:49 PM
first matte painting please crit! will be helpful

10-19-2008, 11:54 PM
You have a good composition here.
Try defining the light and shadow over the building.
Make it easy to find out where the light is coming from and what is in the shadow...

10-20-2008, 10:48 AM
Hey Murdok! Looks like that new hardware is working out real well! ;)

Awesome job on this. It really is awesome work. If you refine some of the shadows like homer said and make sure that your shadows aren't too dark on that left rock it'll look real great.

Keep up the good work

10-21-2008, 02:24 PM
Nice one. I think that there is a little bit too much mist in the mid ground objects but maybe this will not matter when you have defined the light and shadow over the building.

Did you paint that Cathedral from scratch? Its very well done.