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Marzi
10-01-2008, 05:12 AM
Her my last work of integration. Im open to all advice :) I've try to change the light in a first time and after to integrate the buildings on a big mountain, (the pictures are from me.)

The original.

http://www.marzi.ch/images/epsic.jpg

The light exercice.

http://www.marzi.ch/images/epsic1.jpg

The integration exercice.

http://www.marzi.ch/images/epsic2.jpg

homer
10-01-2008, 06:40 PM
The background in the sunset one, might look better if you bring it down a little.
The trees growing off those rocks in the last one seems odd to me. (perhaps removing them might be a better idea)

overall it's in the right track...

Marzi
10-05-2008, 04:10 PM
Ok, tank's you for the advice i'll change it.

cserbuj
10-15-2008, 01:24 AM
Good work ;)

In the first one, maybe the background image is a little unfocussed, perhaps too much for that image...

The second one, i like it much more. I think you've done a good work, trying to match color temp, white & black....

Great work !

elwaely_13
10-15-2008, 03:47 PM
oh,

such a worm and cold design

amazing