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Hi. I'm posting my recent personal work.
Hopefully, I may get some critique to improve this image.
10-01-2008, 02:13 AM
Great looking piece of artwork! I'm afraid I can't crit the work as I'm still learning (well always learning) about matte painting.
Just wanted to say that it's looks cool though. :)
10-01-2008, 06:35 PM
Somethings that might need more attention;
- More reflection on the water surface
- Consistency in light and shadow
- The giant trees in the left are lit from wrong direction and the matte lines on them are too visible.
If you spend a bit more time defining the shadows and make them a bit darker, it will look even better.
really thank you guys for the comments and critique.
10-02-2008, 02:18 AM
apart from Homer's comment I think you should also consider to keep your mountains low and also add more fog on the horizon. By the way I like your concept and its looking good, finally its also good idea to add few boats to show some activity on the lake.
thank you, metalrahul for your critic and suggestions which I totally agree with.
i did concept skt based on comments. Welcome for any comments and critics.
10-06-2008, 01:35 AM
I noticed you made some pretty huge changes to your mountains in the second image, and I have to say that I think the mountains worked much better in the original piece. They gave a great feeling of the city being embedded in them and gave a much better scale than does the second piece. Either way, great work!
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