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09-21-2008, 10:28 AM
this is my first matte, .........hungry for all your valuable suggestion. Thanx.
09-21-2008, 03:32 PM
I would say, first fix the composition;
I'm not sure whether it's about the moon, castle or the river
It's better to have only one strong point of interest (castle I assume) and then let the eye move around the picture...
In this case, it's better if you move the moon out of picture and keep its reflection, and then bring the castle further inside the painting...
09-22-2008, 09:01 AM
Thanks, I will follow your suggestion. Thanx again.
09-22-2008, 10:39 PM
Good start, I agree with homer you need work on your composition. I think its better when its flipped horizontally and I think you should keep the castle a lit bit further away in the scene. You should considering adding some fog into your scene and finally try adding a pathway down to the valley from the castle. http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/9251/mattepaintinggd45vw3.jpg
09-23-2008, 11:15 AM
thanks, I will try to upload it with the corrections as soon as possible.
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