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antonio
09-13-2008, 02:28 PM
hello! this is the second matte painting I post here. I'm posting it as final but critiques or ideas are always very welcome! It's a combination of pictures, tablet and some 3d (especially the main wall). Thanks
http://www.antoniofx.com/temp/mp.jpg
homer
09-17-2008, 01:35 PM
I like the concept very much.
But lighting on pieces are so different from each other.
try to define the light direction and its intensity, then match them all together.
Hope you take this to the next level.
xj220jk
09-18-2008, 09:31 AM
I like this concept a lot as well, and I also agree about the lighting.
Something else that kinda jumped out for me is, the ground plane in between the two walls to the right, as well as the lower left side. It's seems a little to crisp and saturated, especially with how high this is made out to be. It takes away from the believability that it is far down below the rest. Also the perspective of the ground plane to the left in between the walls looks a little off.
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