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nordenworks
08-28-2008, 05:17 PM
Hey!
I am making some matte paintings for my computer animation. This below is one of many which I have still to do to finish. Thank you for watching

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/7819/seaside002idx0.jpg

wind27382
08-28-2008, 05:50 PM
This is really starting to look good. I just think that the left side of the sky might be to bright.

Madster
08-29-2008, 10:40 AM
The sky on the RH side is too desaturated. Rainy clouds, although they appear gray, are not devoid of color.

The LH side is too bright, and too empty as far as visual flow. You have a tapered point helping direct the eye out to...essentially nothing. There is no distant island, or boat, or crashed spaceship. Just empty ocean with too bright lighting. Since this is for a computer animation, what are you planning for this large empty area?

Additionally, the poles on the distant slope do not match the perspective of the cliff edges. You may need to draw out a perspective grid to align things better.

~C