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ResVoCoder
08-19-2008, 02:48 PM
Hi everybody. After long hours of looking at all the cool paintings I finally made some sort of matte painting of my own.
It's not completely finished yet, some details need to be adjusted but I would very much appreciate constructive feedback.

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs32/i/2008/232/2/c/hallway_matte_by_ResVoCoder.jpg

Madster
08-19-2008, 04:21 PM
Some really nice work!
The only glaring fault I see is the way the hallway narrows so drastically just past the door. Unless it's vanishing into infinity about 15 feet further down the hall, you would not see the floor taper that dramatically.

Really really nice job on the lighting and the peeling paint!

~M

ResVoCoder
08-20-2008, 06:02 AM
Thanks for the comment.
The vanishing point does seem a bit close. I'll adjust it a little bit but I 'm going for a kind of warped look so I don't want to lose it completely. Looking at it for so long I lose my judgement about this stuff a bit.

lightwell
08-20-2008, 07:35 AM
I think the VP is okay, it is where it is. I think the visual problem is that the perspective for the door doesn't match that for the floor i.e. you have different VP's for the floor and the panels on the door. If you fix the discrepancy this should start to help.

ResVoCoder
08-20-2008, 10:46 AM
http://resvocoder.deviantart.com/art/hallway-matte-final-95465708
I changed the VP slighty and the door. I also got rid of the lens flare.
I'm pretty happy with it now.
http://resvocoder.deviantart.com/art/hallway-matte-final-95465708