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mrMSK
08-18-2008, 12:18 AM
ok tryed to really giver, and paint, and utalize my brush shapes, bird are alittle repetitive, but i'm opened to any crit!

http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs30/i/2008/141/3/b/Ruined_Sanctuary_by_mr_msk.jpg

mrMSK
08-18-2008, 12:18 AM
http://mskconcept.blogspot.com/

Madster
08-18-2008, 01:03 PM
Your colors are really discordant, and your perspective is terribly wonky. The arches are all different shapes and angles, and you don't have a decent, cohesive, light source.
The skull looks really, really fake and out of place in this scene...

It's a decent Compositional Rough, but needs a lot of work at this stage.

~M

scottN
08-18-2008, 08:44 PM
Cool concept, but it looks very bright.

Swihartc
08-22-2008, 09:31 AM
In this stage and this kind of painterly style, I think being black and white with a large range of values would make this look like concept art for a 3d artist to take and create the environment :) Try it and see what it looks like! Couldn't hurt /thumbs up

CS