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hdeamonic
08-14-2008, 02:19 PM
hello, it's finally me after a long long time..

this could still use some work but i will move on.

http://shrani.si/f/r/R7/4cyMslLh/work1-copy-copy.jpg

hope you like it

Daniel

nickmarshallvfx
08-14-2008, 03:58 PM
Hey Daniel
This is lookin quite nice, i think it needs more atmosphere though, its feeling a bit flat. Get a large fuzzy brush and get some atmosphere in there to push the distant elements right back!

Nick

hdeamonic
08-15-2008, 03:27 AM
Nick thank you for your comment. here's a quick update.


http://shrani.si/f/1m/CB/3C2coZF3/flattened-copy-copy.jpg

nickmarshallvfx
08-15-2008, 05:20 AM
Daniel - The adustments you made there helped, i was thinking about being a lot more heavy handed with the atmosphere though to really draw attention to the castle. I did a quick adjustment to show what i mean, i hope that is ok? If not ill take it down.
I just lightened the distant stuff and made it more saturated blue, and darkened the foreground to really centre focus on the buildings there. By the way, nice job on those, on close inspection you did some great work there.

Hope this helps

Nick

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f397/space-sprayer/flattened-copy-copy.jpg?t=1218799047

hdeamonic
08-15-2008, 06:14 AM
yea lighter and bluer helpes a lot. =)

here's a detail of the buildings.

http://shrani.si/f/2P/XB/4FYTzBnr/1/untitled-1-copy.jpg

ty for the comment. it is good to have someone to tell you what to improve..

secretpixel
08-15-2008, 06:26 AM
looks cool ye ye really need some haze^^

Madster
08-17-2008, 08:30 PM
Good effort!

~M