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RayLaVeau
01-30-2005, 08:10 PM
Hi, I'm seeking some advice on how I should light this. I painted 90% of the mountains and of course adjusted the castles changes. All done in photoshop. Also would like a little critic on it (but be nice its my first time :) ...)

http://graphicdept.com/images/snowcastle3.jpg

B. Kachel
01-30-2005, 08:33 PM
It is a good start but I thnk you need to incorporate some harder edges. It is a little soft on your painted elements. Maybe try using a harder brush.

i n n e r c o r e
01-31-2005, 01:50 AM
yop
I think it's a good start too
but you should do a color calibration, your image is too tern.
The castle don't really match with the montains, study the light and shadows.
the mountains looks good for me ;)

homer
01-31-2005, 08:01 AM
Nice job,
I agree that you need to add more contrast to the castle to match the mountain.
use the shadow of the trees as a reference.
good job.

RayLaVeau
01-31-2005, 11:31 AM
homer: Thanks I will start to work on that as soon as I get home

i n n e r c o r e: Not to sound ignorant (it is my first) How do I go about doing a color Calibration?

B. Kachel: I agree with the harder edges I have been practing with those brushes and am becoming more brave now.

Thank you to all that Replied I appreciate it very much. I will be posting some more soon. I look forward to growing here and learning from everyone
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