Ice Crevice

[Fuzz]

Hey guys. Heres the final in the series of Arctic Mattes i worked on.

Rip me apart.

http://boksar.com/Shot62AerialMatteFinal.jpg

[homer]

In some places it looks a bit blurry, but it looks good.
Good job.

[NickATnitE]

I like your painting so far, though I do have a couple crits for first of all, the use of scattering on your brush is fairly evident on the inside of your crevice and to some degree in the foreground tracks though they look good. the crevice however needs some more lovin' going in and drawing a bunch of cracks and stuff over top should do the trick.

The other thing is that the perspective doesn't look right. It looks like the other side of the crevice is much higher than the foreground, not the same height like i assume you intended. I would suggest the you paint a piece near the middle that almost connects the two sides. maybe in such a way that we can see the side of the piece clossest to us.

I don't know its hard to explain.

Keep up the great work!
Nick Clark

Fix It in Pre-Production!

[Fuzz]

Thanks a lot for the crit.

The weirdness you see in the foreground snow is Cloning, not brush. you're right though, it's been bothering me, plus the scale of tracks is off compared to the crevice.

I know what you're talking about with the weird perspective I told them the same thing, but they were very adamant about having a large gap. I would have painted the two sides closer together because of the perspective. nice catch. Thanks for the look over.