christmas card

[tobiasth]

new artwork, hope you like it.

all done with photoshop.

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs5/i/2005/118/8/b/christmas_card_by_tobiasth.jpg

step_by_step (http://www.deviantart.com/download/14955342/step_by_step_christmascard.jpg)

thx for comments.

tobi :wink:

[tobiasth]

take a look at my step-by-step-guide (step_by_step) :D

[homer]

Nicely done,
I just think With this weather the shadows of the train and bus shouldn't be that dark.

[Novalism]

thats nice tobias

add some foodprints in the snow etc
The snow wipe on the front window of the tram (train) is to hard i think
can be me? but the perspective of the bus is a bit off... even if it's passing.
well just my view!

overall I like the christmas feeling hehe

[Rodder454]

Nice!! It has a great holiday feel...would definitely make a good card.

I only have a few crits, and they're related to saturation. First, I think the saturation of the green (closest) building should be brought down just a bit. Being the only bright color in the image, it competes with the focus of the image (the train) for your attention. Second, the saturation of the far right (orange) building should be a little less. Your image gives the impression it's snowing hard/windy, so at that distance the building most likely would be lighter. Those are small crits though.

Good work.

[tobiasth]

thx for comments!
can't change the saturation at this point, its already printed ... :roll:
so ... merry christmas!