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icaref
11-16-2004, 03:00 PM
A new matte in progress ...
Looking for critics, as usual ...
Enjoy !

Here's the link :

http://francois.ferracci.free.fr/mattes/test01.jpg

bcottman
11-16-2004, 06:05 PM
nice image.. cool composition.. my primary coments would be that the background buildings aren't in correct perspective. the also have a light source illuminating them from the opposite direction that the alleyway is illuminated.. that is possible with a city scene, however if that is your intention you should alter the color of the casting light to a synthetic type of light source, and aslo add the moon light to the same side as the alley. also, the bur of the tallest building (as a depth of field effect) doesnt seem to be consistant with the rest of the image.
striking image though.
brenton

icaref
11-17-2004, 02:00 AM
I agree with you, bcottman. You're totally right ! I'm going to work on these details.
Thanks a lot.
Regards