New matte, work in progress, critics are welcome

[swoop]

Hi, this is a new one that i made today... it's not yet finished, i want to insert people...
the matte :
http://ludovic.iochem.free.fr/images/matte8-2.jpg

and the original :
http://ludovic.iochem.free.fr/images/matte8-1.jpg


i'm waiting for critics
bye SwoOop

[bcottman]

I would try painting some shadows and accents around the base of the bookshelves and desks. Soft shadows like a light dome render leaves not hard cast shadows. I would also add some reflected light from the environment onto the desks and shelves rather that have them go to black. Doing both of those may help to encorporate the objects into the scene a bit better. There are also some perspective issues primarily with the desks.
I hope that is some help.
Brenton