In the Hills

[rendar1970]

Very Very WIP shot for a friends short film. I just cant seem to get it how I like it. There is just something off and I cant figure out what it is our how to fix it.

Any help would be great.

http://davidandbrendapayne.com/matte1.png

[RiKToR]

Your light seems to not have definite direction, mostly in tends to come from the right but not always. Also your perspective to me seems a little off and this causes your elements not to integrate well. Overall its just way to bright for night time, the tree looks day lit but blue as well a lit from below.

[rendar1970]

Update

http://davidandbrendapayne.com/matte2.png