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HeinrichGar
05-23-2006, 09:16 PM
I hope you like it
http://picserver.org/i/MK87L541605G][img]http://picserver.org/i/MK87L541605G/512/p.jpeg

Noel B
05-26-2006, 11:31 PM
I love the colors..... no critiques.... its a cool picture.....




ps. Don't change the colors

Jay_Gladwell
05-27-2006, 06:14 AM
The lighting on the two castles is different. Too, the lighting on the landscape--the color temperature--does not match the sky's.

Speculart
05-27-2006, 06:57 AM
I agree with Jay. If the land and the castles are so yellow there would also be a yellow colour cast in the sea, would probably be a green colour. I like the image I must say.

HeinrichGar
05-28-2006, 02:04 PM
it will fix the color of the sea :P
thx for your critiques!!!!!!!

Arezoofa
05-28-2006, 05:17 PM
i absolutly love the left side of the image, very painterly,beautiful color and light,but the left side seems rushed,the castle perspective doesn't seems right and the lighing is too warm.i like it over all.

HeinrichGar
06-03-2006, 02:12 PM
hi, my update
http://picserver.org/i/1PU1QE4MU5IE][img]http://picserver.org/i/1PU1QE4MU5IE/128/p.jpeg

Speculart
06-03-2006, 07:21 PM
the right castle needs to be pushed back. Its tones are very close to the foreground. you could put a little haze over that and the left cliff, leaving only the forground hill with strong tones.
Knitting together better.