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metafor
04-27-2006, 03:48 AM
hi everythingx

im metafor from turkiye



it is my first mattepaint work

please you say opinion..

thanx


http://www.3fil.com/webertunc.jpg

metafor
04-27-2006, 10:00 AM
Why any person write opinion ? my work too much bad ?

zoki
04-27-2006, 11:09 AM
no its not bad at all, it has potential sure!
just fix colors because on the mosque looks like sunset and behind is night
try toreduce some elements
and maybe add some foreground elements
hope it helps
z

tobiasth
04-27-2006, 11:41 PM
hi metafor!
good start, but i agree with zoki! you has to much colors for a night szene and i would remove the second planet, the red one looks not very realistic. what do you want, making a night or day scenery ?

metafor
04-28-2006, 04:30 AM
tobiasth and zoki thanx very much

i will try mix foreground zoki

and tobiast i will remove second planet
but i dont work again same pitcure for this reason i will make try other world...

thanx so much