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Temüjin
04-17-2006, 10:09 AM
Hi guys...I´ m new here.
I hope you like my work:

http://www.temujin.cz/matte01b.jpg

zoki
04-17-2006, 10:38 AM
uf very nice work!
very peaceful
I think beach line on right side is too clean and straight so try masking it with some rocks or bigger stones
Castle is maybe too clean or simple boxed shape
otherwise very nive colors and atmosphere
z

RALawrence
04-17-2006, 07:30 PM
I agree that the shores need to be visually broken up.
Also, the cliff seems too barren to me. Some well-placed shrubs and a few trees would do wonders.
Honestly, this piece is excellent. Well thought out and executed.