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r.n.
04-13-2006, 12:40 PM
my next matte, I`m looking for suggestions and opinion


http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/1605/wzgorze19xv.jpg

RiKToR
04-13-2006, 03:17 PM
This looking good so far I just have some points for you to look at. Your perspective on your wall seem to match well except at the point located in image I painted over. Also your creature in front has to much lighting on the right side for a backlit situation. I don't know if this was intentional (sub suraface scattering or something) but it looks odd. Also there should be a alot of rim lighting on trees and the house as well as a lot of other places. Compositionally I couldn't tell you if its right or not something I am working on myself. Hope this helps.

www.blurred-pixels.com/images/ref.jpg (http://www.blurred-pixels.com/images/ref.jpg)

r.n.
04-14-2006, 08:18 AM
thanks for suggestions . here is an update

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/6177/img261gg.jpg

LFGabel
04-14-2006, 09:53 AM
If it's realism you're after (I assume you are), then the moon is way too big. Also, I notice a few repeating patterns in the foreground due to the clone brush...

RiKToR
04-15-2006, 02:38 AM
Alot better, I didn't really notice the cloned stuff until it was pointed out, Also there seems to be big shadow from a tree across the path about midway that doesn' t follow the lighting scheme.

Very good so far.

Vogonpoet
04-15-2006, 11:07 PM
I agree that the moon is too big, but I don't think that's as big a problem as the moon seeming to be in front of the cloud layers rather than behind them.

r.n.
04-16-2006, 10:04 AM
I fix the shadows , version with small moon ... I don't wont the clouds on the moon i like full moon :)

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/833/hillsmallmoon2yr.jpg

and big moon ;)

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8375/hill1rm.jpg