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de gerardo
04-09-2006, 01:10 PM
Hi this is my new image here. This is a water fall old city and this is my favourite work from my portfolio. I hope, that you like it too ;) I am freelancer and for more informations of me, please contact me via e-mail. Thank you for all views, comments and etc.. dE Gerardo.
http://www.degerardo.szm.sk/bigpic/10.jpg

LFGabel
04-09-2006, 08:27 PM
I like the top half. It seems a lot stronger thant he bottom half. The perspective on the bottom half seems strange. The ring of stone work at the bottom feels out of place. Also, I see extensive use of the cloning tool and/or copying/flipping parts of the image. It brings me out of the environment.

zoki
04-09-2006, 11:43 PM
very nice work gerardo
for a painting I think it is ok to have so much details because you have all the time you need to read it
but for the matte painting you must usualy see it in under a minute and is a little overcrowded in my oppinion I would decide whats important on it and emphasize that and introduce some other color but green ,now its almost monochrome green, I would go for rusty browns!
z

Jay_Gladwell
04-10-2006, 04:02 AM
Did you intend for it have that green tint throughout?

tobiasth
04-18-2006, 05:12 AM
agree with LFGabel
the top half looks much better then the bottom!
it looks "overloaded" for me.