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Kan
03-27-2006, 02:44 PM
Hi,

My newest matte. Comments are most welcome.

Cheers,

Khan

http://www.streamatica.ch/Power_plant.jpg

NickATnitE
03-27-2006, 02:59 PM
Hi Khan,
That's a very cool Idea you have there however the matte needs some work. The only problem I have with it is that it doesn't lead the eye around.

I find it somewhat confusing and hard to really pick out where I'm supposed to look. I think if you had an element in the extreme foreground, it might help to get you eye moving around the page.

Also the silhouette of the power plant is getting lost in the darkness. you might want to brighten the sky and background a little bit to make the plant POP! (this could be just my monitor however and if so I'm sorry)

I hope this helps,
Keep Up the good work!

Nick Clark

http://student.vfs.com/~nicholasc/

http://nickatnite.cgsociety.org/gallery/[/url]

Kan
04-07-2006, 05:09 AM
Thank you, Nick. I did actually have another version of it, as you can see on the small thumbnail, which showed more of the structure and fgr elements but then i cropped the image and it looked simply right for me.
And, i was also trying to achieve that certain VHS-look with terriblle contrast.
Hope that explains some of your inputs.
Cheers,
Kan