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darkeon
02-18-2006, 02:21 PM
First matte. All in photoshop. What do u think about?
http://www.creativespot.org/post/data/500/Mattepaint1HR2.jpg

darkeon
02-18-2006, 02:23 PM
Here the photos references
http://www.creativespot.org/post/data/500/medium/photos_references.jpg

Noel B
02-18-2006, 03:48 PM
Thats pretty cool man...... like the wide angle perspective

lilguy
02-19-2006, 06:52 AM
Good work...
Maybe the horizonline must be too blury

Cobawsky
02-19-2006, 04:07 PM
I think U should get the sea near the orizon a little darken...

and I think the waves too big... too high elevations

sorry about the english, hope u understand...

aksu
02-19-2006, 11:31 PM
The biggest problem is the lighting. Take a good look at your image, think about the light source and then work out the shadows, highlights...
The levels (black and white points) also need more attention.

kmblackbear06
02-22-2006, 07:41 AM
I think U should get the sea near the orizon a little darken...

and I think the waves too big... too high elevations

sorry about the english, hope u understand...


I agree here, it looks really good, except the strong horizon line. If it had some atmospheric haze to it, it would look very nice and believable.

I have a hard time with lighting myself and understanding it, so I can't help you out there.

The bridge looks a bit "wobbly". Was it intended? I can see from the reference pic it is wobbly too... Not sure if a smooth bridge would look better though.... Just a thought. Keep it up :)